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31 May 2016 @ 08:00 am
FIC: Teacher's Pet, Part 31 (Charlie/Draco, NC-17)  
Title: Teacher's Pet, Part 31 -- FINISHED
Author: gracerene
Pairing: Charlie/Draco
Word Count: ~1,000 this chapter, ~19,500 total
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: professor/student, clubs, blow jobs, semi-public sex, some dirty talk
Challenge: hp_may_madness 2016 Day #31: Green, hung, strongbow
Author's Notes: Unbeta'd. HOLY SHIT YOU GUYS, I AM DONE! I can't believe this is currently the forth longest thing I've ever posted (and all of it is unbeta'd...YIKES!) hp-may-madness is awesome and completely insane, and I cannot believe I made it. Thank you SO MUCH to everybody who has read and commented along with this one. Your encouragement has meant a lot! And congrats to all you other insane people doing May Madness with me! It's been awesome to see so many interesting and awesome drabbles and ficlets over this past month! And now, for the ending we've all been waiting for...

Part 30

The thud of the base shivered up through the soles of Charlie's feet, making Charlie's entire body feel electric and alive. Lights flashed, bodies writhed, and the entire club pulsed with life and sex. Charlie knew he'd be getting lucky tonight.

He ordered a Strongbow from the bartender and scoped out the possibilities. Several blokes tried to catch his gaze, but none of them were what Charlie was looking for. The man in the green shirt looked far too aggressive for Charlie’s tastes, the pretty boy with the sparkling eyeliner was a little more feminine than Charlie generally preferred, and the blatantly attractive dark haired man in the suit seemed sleazy and fake.

Charlie was just starting to wonder if he’d been overconfident about his prospects when he saw him. He was gorgeous: tall and fine-featured, but with a sharpness to him that Charlie found endlessly appealing. His hair was blond, almost electric white in the flare of the throbbing lights, and his dark trousers were tight, accentuating his perfect backside. The beginnings of lust began to snake their way through Charlie's insides. Charlie caught the bloke's gaze, pleased by the obvious desire swimming in his grey eyes. He beckoned the man over.

Pretty pink lips curved into a seductive smile, and then he was walking towards Charlie with obvious intent. Without a word they moved onto the dance floor.

They slipped into an easy, sensual, seductive rhythm. Charlie’s hands slid down a slim waist to settle on firm hips that swayed to the beat of the pounding music. Inch by inch they moved closer together, until the bloke was practically riding Charlie’s thigh, his hands wrapped around Charlie’s shoulders and his eyes smoldering up at Charlie. Just when Charlie thought he was going to finally give in and kiss those perfect pink lips, the bloke was turning around in Charlie’s arms, pressing his arse tight up against Charlie’s groin.

The music swelled and Charlie swelled with it. The pressure on his cock was glorious and excruciating. Charlie wasn’t sure if he could last much longer without release.

“Fuck, you’re perfect,” Charlie murmured into the man’s ear.

That fantastic arse arched back against him in a slow, filthy grind, and the bloke turned to flash Charlie a wicked smile. “Feels like you’re not so bad yourself.”

“You could find out for sure if you wanted.”

The wonderful pressure disappeared, and then the bloke was turning again to face Charlie. “Oh? And how do you propose I do that?”

“I was thinking we could head over to that shadowy corner there, and you could get on your knees for me.”

A long swallow, then, “I could do that.”

Charlie practically dragged them over to the corner, heart racing when his companion dropped to his knees without hesitation. Charlie’s flies were undone in the blink of an eye, his hard, heavy cock springing out of his pants with enthusiasm.

“You really are every bit as hung as you felt.”

Charlie didn’t even have a chance to feel smug before his cock disappeared into that warm, wet, talented mouth.

This clearly wasn’t the boy’s first time, and Charlie couldn’t stop a guttural groan as his cock was swallowed down over and over again. The sight of his prick disappearing between those lush lips, the fire burning in those grey eyes as the man looked up at Charlie, all of it was nearly too much to handle.

It was over far too quickly. Charlie’s orgasm knocked the breath out of him as, with a satisfied moan, he emptied himself down that willing throat. The man only moaned around Charlie’s prick in response, his hand shoved down his trousers as he wanked himself off with furious motions.

Charlie pulled him up off the ground after he’d finished, kissing him soundly and licking the taste of himself out of his mouth.

“That was excellent.”

“It was, wasn’t it? I have the best ideas.”

Charlie grinned. “Of course you do, Draco. But we should probably head home. We’ve got to be at the Burrow at ten tomorrow morning, and you know how cranky you get around my family if you haven’t had a full night’s sleep.”

Draco made a face, but he followed it with a smile. Charlie knew that being around Charlie’s family was exhausting for Draco, but he also knew how much Draco had come to care for them all over the past two years. It had taken awhile, and there had been some rough patches for them both, but they’d finally managed to get themselves and their families into a good place. It may have been difficult at times, but it had been completely worth it to have Draco by his side.

“You’re right. The more sleep I can get, the better.” Draco’s expression turned forlorn as his fingers traced patterns into Charlie’s pecs. “Though I guess that means you won’t be able to stay up and fuck me when we get home. I’d thought maybe I could get on my hands and knees on our nice, new bed and let you fuck me from behind. But I suppose we could do that another time…”

Charlie’s softened cock gave an interested twitch. “Let’s not be hasty. As long as we’re in bed, it doesn’t matter what we do.”

“But I thought you were saying we needed to go to sleep. We won’t have time to fuck and get a full night’s rest—not with what I had planned.” Draco’s eyes sparkled mischievously, and Charlie’s heart nearly overloaded with love and desire.

Charlie leaned in and kissed Draco sweetly. His fingers found Draco’s and he squeezed softly as he pulled back to look into Draco’s eyes. He never would have guessed coming back to Britain would lead to this life with Draco, and he thanked his lucky stars yet again that he’d stumbled into something so brilliant.

“Don’t worry, Draco. We’ve got all the time in the world.”
 
 
 
Keeper of the Cocks: Dracotorino10154 on May 31st, 2016 02:07 pm (UTC)
*\o/* YAY!!! This was a perfect ending. Hot and sweet. Congrats, Grace! Loved the fic from beginning to end. Well done.
wicked smut goddessgracerene on May 31st, 2016 03:16 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! Definitely a very different style of writing for me, so I'm really excited I managed to survive the full 31 days!
kerrilee75kerrilee75 on May 31st, 2016 02:24 pm (UTC)
Congratulations, my dear!! What an accomplishment!! You used those prompts masterfully.

I love that you ended it back where it all began and they're still together. This was a fun ride. I hope you'll consider writing this pair more.
wicked smut goddessgracerene on May 31st, 2016 03:17 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much!

Yeah, I was originally planning on ending it with the King's Cross date scene, but I really liked the symmetry of ending it in the club. :D

I think I'll need a bit of a break from these two, but I'm sure I will end up writing them again eventually. :)
welcome to villa cariño!capitu on May 31st, 2016 02:40 pm (UTC)
Oh my god, such a perfect ending. They've come such a long way and they still can't get their hands off each other. :D

And the mention of their families and the Burrow made everything sweeter. <3

Amazing job, Grace. It was wonderful to see this story unfold. I truly lost myself in your words, worked every prompt perfectly with the story you were telling. You should be proud of this story. Wow, 19,5K! Incredible! So happy and proud myself! :D
wicked smut goddessgracerene on May 31st, 2016 03:19 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much, lovely! I know, I can't believe I wrote almost 20k this month on this story alone! So crazy. :D


<3
digthewriter: Jumping Braddigthewriter on May 31st, 2016 03:09 pm (UTC)
awesome job! yay for finishing!
wicked smut goddessgracerene on May 31st, 2016 03:18 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much! I'm definitely excited about making it all the way to the end of the month!
Melissa Rose_melodic_ on May 31st, 2016 06:13 pm (UTC)
Oh my goodness, what a fantastic ending! I thought we were being treated with a flashback scene of when they first hooked up... how fun that they were just almost recreating it themselves at a club!

Oh I love that we jumped into the future and got to see how their relationship progressed and that, despite their differences, they really did and do continue to work together.

Sigh, what a lovely journey! It's so impressive you managed to update this every day and pace it so well without being able to pre-write the chapters. I can't believe that word count! It certainly didn't seem that long when posted day by day but look how it grew! How exciting!

Thank you for this wondrous fiction. It's even more special for me, as you were the one who got me into Charlie/Draco with your Danger in Frustration story.

<3
wicked smut goddessgracerene on May 31st, 2016 11:45 pm (UTC)
LOL, I defintiely wanted it to seem like a flashback scene, so I'm glad that's what it felt like to you!

I originally planned on ending things on the platform with the date request, but I realized I wanted to have a mini-epilogue of sorts, showing that things all work out for the best. :)

And thank you so much! A couple of days in a did a very loose outline for the general day I wanted big milestones to happen, so I wouldn't end up throwing the pace completely off, but writing a story like this, one day at a time, was really a different experience. I was a little shocked by the end WC myself--I don't know that this is the story I would have picked to tell if I'd realized how long it would get! But I'm definitely happy with it. :D

So thrilled you enjoyed! Thank you so much for reading and commenting along. <33
Sabetheasabethea on May 31st, 2016 06:19 pm (UTC)
<3

This has been beautiful.

I will miss the updates now May is over :( You are wonderful and I do love your writing.
wicked smut goddessgracerene on May 31st, 2016 11:41 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much darling! It's already strange not having those daily prompts looming over my head, but it'll be good to have a little break. Definitely have more fics planned for June. :D
alisannealisanne on May 31st, 2016 06:29 pm (UTC)
Mmmm. hot and delicious and sweet. The perfect finale.
I love how it circles back to the beginning, to where they met, although now, of course everything's different and they are a happy, stable couple, with Draco being accepted by Charlie's family. :)
I a curious about what Draco's family thinks of Charlie... *g*
Anyway, just lovely, hon!
Great job all around and congratulations for successfully completing May Madness. It's a crazy thing. <3
wicked smut goddessgracerene on May 31st, 2016 11:47 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! I thought ending things where they began was a fun sort of symetry. :)

Thanks for reading and commenting along! <3
smirkingcatsmirkingcat on May 31st, 2016 07:10 pm (UTC)
wow!
that was so worth the wait
but the wait was awful!
and first congrats for sticking to it and writing a complete story in 31 days!!!! thats just amazing! well done!
and then wow to this fic!
like i always knew i adore charlie/draco but you made me adore them just that much more!
this is really good
and the way you ended it- kinda like you begun it only better
and yay for happy end and for them managing to stick together!
really thank you so much for writing this, it is awesome!
wicked smut goddessgracerene on May 31st, 2016 11:49 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm definitely a little shocked that I managed to post something for every single prompt, but it was a fun project.

Super thrilled you enjoyed and I've really appreciated your lovely comments! :)
lijahlover: Brokeback Mountainlijahlover on June 1st, 2016 03:21 am (UTC)
Ohhhhhh brillant and perfect from start to finish.

I will miss these two :)

Thank you for writing them :)
wicked smut goddessgracerene on June 1st, 2016 10:21 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm thrilled you enjoyed and I really appreciate all of your lovely comments!
lokifanlokifan on June 2nd, 2016 12:41 pm (UTC)
Aw, yay! Great ending to a fic I've really enjoyed!
wicked smut goddessgracerene on June 2nd, 2016 09:44 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm really happy you enjoyed! <3